Issue though... could the box around the "JL" not touch the L? It's hard to read the JL as JL right now. It's looking more like JU-- I think we mentioned that last class. sorry if I'm being repetitive.
I like these colors. They are very bold and fun, if that's what you are going for then i think it works.
I like the dot of the J being the only green element on the front. could you tie in green dots on the back somewhere?
I'd like a combination b/t the first one and the last one. I'm not a fan of the centered type on the fist card, I like how you handled the type on the last one. I like the simplicity of a white background on the top card. There's also something I like about that line under "Graphic Designer". Hope something in that helps...
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i think the original colors were more jackie-esque. why the new colors?
I LIKE THE BACK OF THE BIZ CARD. IT IS FUN AND INTERESTING AND RELATES WELL TO YOUR WORK.
I LIKE THE BOTTOM BIZ CARD BECAUSE THE TYPE IS NOT CENTERED.
WHAT WOULD IT LOOK LIKE NOT REVERSED OUT OF A SOLID COLOR?
I AM WORRIED THAT WHEN YOU PRINT THIS CARD THAT THE REGISTRATION OF THE PRINTING WILL MAKE THE FINE TYPE BECOME MUDDY.
Sorry for the all caps. I really have trouble with my new keyboard.
As for Kristy's comment about color, perhaps do a few color variations as part of your exploration of this. This is not uncommon to do at all.
I also like the bottom business card.
Issue though... could the box around the "JL" not touch the L? It's hard to read the JL as JL right now. It's looking more like JU-- I think we mentioned that last class. sorry if I'm being repetitive.
I like these colors. They are very bold and fun, if that's what you are going for then i think it works.
I like the dot of the J being the only green element on the front. could you tie in green dots on the back somewhere?
i like the set of red and brown colors, although the third identity business card that is all maroon doesn't seem to work as well as the other two.
I'd like a combination b/t the first one and the last one. I'm not a fan of the centered type on the fist card, I like how you handled the type on the last one. I like the simplicity of a white background on the top card. There's also something I like about that line under "Graphic Designer". Hope something in that helps...
-Denisha
Whooooa, dunno how the green/blue happened. If you click on it my original colors magically appear. Weird.
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